the face that i see is bold and beautiful
many emotions beneath the eyes
the strong will that is seen is awesome
but the shyness behind is seldom realised
attitude personified it is
arrongance is the thing that is seen
rudeness is what shown
love and affection are the sheen
ego throws you away
but it is the self determination that is unseen
the beautiful smile that it has
words beneath the lips are never said
the lovely curves are beautiful to look at
the pain inside the body is unknown
a mixture of too many emotions it is
warmth and care are its own
seems to be simple to read
but the pages are not clearly written
while everyone thinks it is quite open
no one knows whats hidden
proudness is poured out
it is self-sufficient smitten
a face that i see everyday
many thoughts and many questions
thats the face that i try to read
a face in the mirror that it is!
11 comments:
You've proved yourself again......nice one!!!!
Thats one way of introspection :)
well written :)
pretty neat.. well done..
superb one swathi.......not finding words to describe it beauty ......u simply rock
cheers
chaits
i wrote something similar about u and wanted to gift u that,but after reading this write up i am sure mine doesnt even come to half as good as this one is.......so scrapping my work
Being one person who knows you more closer i always felt these words about u and the so called other side of yours :) which i guess only few know and i feel lucky to be one of them or the one only one :D
cheers
u rock
with love
j3m
very very very nice ..
nicely written..
every time i read ur blog it introduces me to a new side of urs..
its fun to knw u this way
keep it up..
ummmm well u r thoughts r flowing through these words a bit but in all a pretty lame poems with no good metaphors and rhyming is awfully screwed up.....u need to work on riting poems...
nice one Swati .. u rock !!
Beautiful..
nice one..
after reading the last line, had to read the poem again so that I remember it in the right context :)
Now Swathi, i am speech less, i have no words to appreciate u and yr poem, i t wud be like showing light to the sun, if i appreciate you. iam sure u know how much i appreciate every thing of yrs.
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