Thursday, April 23, 2009

was it all just for fun?


u made me laugh
u kept me happy all the time...
u tried to give me everything under the sun

we cherished every moment together
we lived through every happiness...
i felt its only u and i have none

now i need u so much
i know i am incomplete without u...
but u say it was all just for fun


12 comments:

Arv said...

who is he???

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I felt good while reading but the last line made my smile fade away...

shall i say good attempt ? Ok it is..:)

Keep writing..:)

fms1988 said...

GREAT !!!
keep writing :)

A Confused soul said...

Nice one!
Hopefully you are not going throught that now.

Arpita said...

waw.......swathi i never knew u write poem, it was really good one...

muthu said...

nice write....

Anya said...

all for fun?
kill him

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Prash said...

ya...who is he ?

the cat [read it as prash] is curious ! :-)

Somal Thakore said...

TO CARE...is TO LOVE.

simply ....understand

Sandee said...

Men! Who is he? I want to know too.

Have a terrific day. :)

swathi's said...

@ arv- no one ya...its just a write up...

@ mahesh- hey thanks buddy..

@fms- thankuuuuu

@confused soul- na na..am always safe..

@arpita- thanks thanks..sometimes aisa bhi ho jata hai life mein..lol

@muthu- thanks muthu

@criz- would you help me?

@prash- hehe..some one in my imaginary world..by the way..u better get up now

@ somal- philo mat ho jao yar..

@sandee- haha..no one ya..

Gauri Mathur said...

Simple and Straight!
:)
Keep Writing!
:)
and Be Happy:-)