the cool breeze was flowing through her cheeks and her hair strands were giving her a tingling sensation...she was in deep sleep and then there was her man of her dreams...he moved the hair on her forehead and she was yet to believe it...he slowly moved towards her..her heart was beating at jet speed and she could literally hear the sound...he drew close to her and she closed her eyes...he slowly kissed her on her cheek and she made a jerk...thats it...she opened her eyes and there he was sitting next to her...it wasn't a dream at all...the kiss was real...she sat straight and stared at him...she was sweating...he asked her how she felt about the kiss and she jumped out of the bed...he came closer and held her from back...she is now about to die...the moment was romantic enough for a teenage girl on a breezy cold winter night...but it wasnt for her...she moved out of his arms and rushed into another bedroom...locked herself inside and sat on the floor...
it was a kiss...a kiss that she never expected...it was a hug...a hug that she never wanted! tears were scrolling and she had no one to speak to...for she knew she was being sexually attacked...the man is none other than her uncle whom her father trusted and asked him to take care of this little girl.....
11 comments:
I feel rules of muslim countries need to be implemented for people who sexually abuse others,especially children.
chaits
The first paragraph made me excited hoping for something good,but as i read the last few lines,my emotions changed.......very well written swats.
good one
chaits once again :)
he's tall dark bald head. big old ass. a big f***er. he's to repent for all his f***ing deeds. ass hole. am sorry to use this lingo. but he and only he deserves this lingo. here goes a curse from a virgin girl..he'll die out of a helpless situation...at that moment he'll have to realize all his F***ing deeds and feels miserable and kill himself. thu.
Strikes hard.. Brings out a strong message.. He should be the one locked behind..
Well written..
@ sans : Looks like you gonna give him Kumbhi Pakam,Krimi Bhojanam,Sula Dhandanam all mixed together.....i feel he deserves it !!
I wasnt expecting this... its an atrocious act... :(
something romantic i expected and it turned out to be a...
Great pen....
unexpected and GROSS!
i totally agree with SANS
thnx for stopping by :)
were you talking about any real incident ?
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prash the curious cat
when i read the first lines i was happy with the whole emotion .. but the end made me felt terrible..
i really wish if kids who get sexually abused like this should come out n tell there parents so that the F***** gets what he deserves..
and also feel kids should be given sex education early so that they would know what they are going through is wrong..
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